KNOX PUPILS' SUCCESS IN CREATIVE WRITING COMPETITION

The Tyne and Esk Young Writer of the Year Competition

Last term a number of our pupils enjoyed creating their entries for this competition.  There were over500 entries from across Lothian, and we are particularly proud of four Knox students who were short-listed.

Secondary Poetry (7 entries short-listed - 2 from Knox)

Cosmic Hill by Sophie Hay (14)
The Broken Heart, The Broken Mirror by Riona Bruce (12)
 
Secondary Prose (8 entries short-listed - 3 from Knox)
The Shadow of the Beach and The Past  by Riona Bruce (12)
A Matter Of Life Or Death – Caitlin Black (15)
Left behind – Charlotte Smith (13)
 
You can read Cosmic Hill here...
 

Cosmic Hill

Don’t we all know we work all day

In the light of the golden sun?

That we work in all its warm golden ray

That we play, that we work, that we run?

 

Until night falls along with the light

Till all were home and in bed

We all would rest when our worlds were right

And wishes of good dreams were all said.

 

But some people came out at night

Because some of us didn’t sleep at home

We all knew that the world wasn’t right

And out in the dark we would roam.

 

And atop the Cosmic  hill we sat

Alone out in the dark

Oh star, oh star where are you at?

Where I wonder where you are.

 

And time again this’ll never end

We collect our newest dreams

And imagine the people we did defend

Though nothing was as it seems.

 

And with all of this over

And the night is sure to be done

The stars go home and sleep again

And up comes out the sun.

 

So goodnight to the stars of the dark, dark night

Goodbye to the moon until

Away goes another day, you see,

And we sit atop the Cosmic hill.